i did ..i got lost..i thankyou both for your comments specially you val being an accomplished author yourself..and dale i knew you would get the end before you read it..thats me you see such a good writer...did you feel the antici-------pation!...
anne marie i value your opinion too...as a accomplished writer too...your input is appreciated...thankyou..i know what you mean about writers block now i had it half way through!..
it was the invisible d!!! drive...the swine..anyhow back to my novel...ive had guy richie on the phone...wants to turn it in to a film..we're talking megga blockbuster..
no i want blockbuster..i want rave reviews...i want the finest actors on the planet...im thinking oscars..emmys...pristigious awards..i know my modesty precludes me..
Fascinating writing, I couldn't put it down, memory lane - lying in bed with my eyes closed viewing the black blank space between em. Fucking amazing how you pulled it off. Much respect.
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an outstanding read even if i say so myself...its got everything...the booker prize beckens..or even readers digest...
chat mag even...
beckons even..gis a break..ive just wrote a book!!!!
What's this?? A new style of short story...lol...or just an abbreviated book with all the dross cut out..;-)
Brtilliant, erudite and superbly written!
You were gone so long I thought maybe you'd traveled the Invisible Road...
Welcome back!
i did ..i got lost..i thankyou both for your comments specially you val being an accomplished author yourself..and dale i knew you would get the end before you read it..thats me you see such a good writer...did you feel the antici-------pation!...
Gypsy, the pleasure was over too quickly.
anne marie i value your opinion too...as a accomplished writer too...your input is appreciated...thankyou..i know what you mean about writers block now i had it half way through!..
...it was a bit like teenage sex.
I am awed by the astounding heart wrenching sentiment in that first line......what an experience!
What a fitting end......
Gypsy have you taken a C drive down the invisible road again?
it was the invisible d!!! drive...the swine..anyhow back to my novel...ive had guy richie on the phone...wants to turn it in to a film..we're talking megga blockbuster..
I say go for a mini series...
no i want blockbuster..i want rave reviews...i want the finest actors on the planet...im thinking oscars..emmys...pristigious awards..i know my modesty precludes me..
Now that's what I call a great use of the Pregnant Pause... it's so big it's having triplets.
Ernest Hemingway eat your heart out!
LOL... precludes or eludes?
deludes dale...lol...
Fascinating writing, I couldn't put it down, memory lane - lying in bed with my eyes closed viewing the black blank space between em. Fucking amazing how you pulled it off. Much respect.
thankyou string mucho appreciate your view...i was thinking of doing an abridged version for radio four what you think??...
Go for it, what have you got to lose?
still might be to long..may have to be brutal on the editing string?...
dont want to lose the essence...
Don't let Alfie boss you around, typical cat critic...
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